Sunday, July 23, 2023

Homicide in the House


Book: Homicide in the House: Washington Whodunit #2

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Basic Information:

Author: Colleen J. Shogan

Edition: epub on Libby from the Los Angeles Public Library

Publisher: Camel Press

ISBN: 258

Start Date: July 20, 2023

Read Date: July 23, 2023

258 pages

Genre:  Fiction, Mystery

Language Warning:  None

Rated Overall: 3  out of 5


Fiction-Tells a good story: 3 out of 5

Fiction-Character development: 3 out of 5



Synopsis (Caution: Spoiler Alert-Jump to Thoughts):

Kit Marshall now works for Representative Dixon from North Carolina. Dixon finds a very important staffer killed with the Speaker’s gavel. She is the prime suspect. Kit tracks down the the murderer from very little clues. At the end she is associated and abducted by the murderer. She manages to free herself and gets the murderer apprehended.



Cast of Characters:
  • Maeve Dixon-Freshman representative from North Carolina, accused of murder of Jack Drysdale. Ex-military. Very literal.
  • Kit Marshall-Maeve Dixon’s Legislative Director
  • Dan-Chief of Staff for Maeve Dixon’s office. Naive and easily panicked.
  • Jack Drysdale-Chief of Staff for the Speaker of the House, most powerful Congressional staffer, terse and somewhat a bully. Murder victim
  • Jordan Macintyre-Jack Drysdale’s husband. Popular chef
  • Doug Hollingsworth-live-in boyfriend of Kit Marshall
  • Meg Peters-friend of Kit Marshall
  • Judy Talent-chief of staff of a powerful representative, rival of Drysdale
  • Trevor-intelligent semi-friend of Kit Marshall. Lobbyist for a powerful defense contractor
  • Trent Roscoe- assistant to the Sergeant of Arms for the House of Representatives
  • Gareth Pressler-Sergeant of Arms for the House of Representatives
  • Detective O’Halloran-investigating murder of Jack Drysdale
  • Hill Rat-an anonymous blogger who mysteriously knew everybody’s secret
  • Clarence-Kit and Doug’s beagle
  • Melinda Gomez-Former student of Doug. Assistant Superintendent in the press gallery

Thoughts:

Shogan does good descriptions of life in Washington DC and particularly the Capitol area. She should. She worked as a Congressional staffer before becoming head of the National Archives.


The author continues what she does in the first book-naming all the great, and not so great, detective sleuths she can think of.


The adversarial relationship between Doug and Meg seems forced and contrived.


Places Mentioned:



Chapter One

Sets the scene that the Federal Government is about to shut down because there is an impasse between the the parties in Congress and the President. It is a time of rising tensions.


Homespun constituents-What is this? What is she talking about? Almost sounds derogatory towards the people whom a Congressperson is representing.


Dixon was getting pressure to toe the party line. She wanted to make sure her District was behind her. Kit was appointed lead to talk to the Speaker’s office.


Chapter Two

Day one of the shutdown. Kit gets to the office early after a long night at the office.


Chapter Four

Congressperson Dixon would listen to the Speaker's proposal, but say she will consider it-that is Kit’s plan. In the meantime, Clarence, Kit and Doug’s dog was being entered in a dog popularity contest. While Dixon met with the Speaker, Kit was meeting with Drysdale. Drysdale was putting the vote in a political perspective rather than a how is this responsible way to spend. Drysdale was unsatisfied with Kit’s answer. He confronts Dixon. Is not happy with Dixon either. He confronts her and there is even a physical element to it.


Members of the majority party in the House of Representatives took turns serving as the presiding officer of floor debate. Freshmen spent more time “in the chair” than senior legislators. Dixon was tapped to serve here while the Speaker was away.


Chapter Five

Kit is told that Dixon is in trouble. Meet her in the Capitol Rotunda. When Kit finds her there, 30 minutes after getting the message. Detective O’Halloran is there with Dixon. Drysdale is there, dead.


Chapter Six

Dixon is the leading suspect: motive-the fight yesterday, opportunity, and weapon-the Speaker’s gavel. Kit talks to O’Hallaron. Dan, her boss, and Dixon’s chief of staff, assigns Kit the task of solving the murder.


Chapter Seven

Two possible suspects: Judy Talent-Drysdale chief rival-and Gareth Pressler-Sergeant of Arms, whom Drysdale turned down the request for security reforms. Meg adds Jordan Macintyre to the list of suspects

 

Reason why Dixon was at the Rotunda that morning was that Dan had gotten a message saying it was from Jack to meet him at the Rotunda. It was a set up. The call was made from the Capitol Visitor Center.


Chapter Eight

The question Shogan asks is why would this call be placed to Dan from the Visitor Center? Why not Kit? And who placed the call? My question is, why didn’t Dan come forward to Dective O’Halloran and show him the phone? And why didn’t the police look at the tapes to see who was in the Visitor Center then? Seems rather weak to me.


Kit talks to Melinda. They met in a Cafeteria for a snack and information. Shogan’s comment is that It takes forever to make a difference around here.[Congress] … congressional achievements were measured not in days, months, or even years, but decades. Interesting divergent thoughts from Shogan. Do not be too fixated on the right now, but look at the general trend.


Melinda says the press thinks that the guy behind the Hill Rat blog is behind the murder. Drysdale had threatened to expose the anonymous blogger.


Chapter Nine

Kit mentions setting up a meeting at We The Pizza which Spike Mendelsohn runs. When we were in DC, we ate at Good Stuff Eatery in Georgetown. This is one of Mendlesohn’s restaurants. Also we have his cookbook.


She has a chance meeting with Trevor, her former officemate from the first book. Kit tells Trevor that Dixon might be a suspect and had found the body. Trevor has contacts which will help Kit investigate.


Chapter Ten

She researches the Speaker’s gavel in the Library of Congress and discovers that at any one time there may be more than one gavel-a set of spares in case one breaks.


Chapter Eleven

Lunch with Judy Talent. Kept herself well. If I could guess, I’d wager that Judy’s intensity pervaded her whole existence—her work, appearance, and personal relationships. She questions Judy about Drysdale.


Chapter Twelve

Kit meets with Trent Roscoe, ostentatiously about House security. But Kit is trying to figure out a way to find if Trent’s boss is involved with Drysdales murder.


Chapter Fifteen

Clarence, Kit and Doug’s dog had a popularity contest which raised money for a dog shelter. They are at a celebration for it. Kit talks to Jordan MacIntyre. Kit questions him. Jordan figures out that she works with the prime suspect of the killer of his husband. Jordan looks threatening. Clarence lunges for him and then goes after the pizza.


Chapter Sixteen

Clarence’s Top Dog award was rescinded because of the chaos he caused. The three go out for an after meeting at a bistro. Jordan is a suspect because of the money he will be inheriting, enabling him to open his own restaurant.


Doug talks about Occam’s razor. He says this points to Dixon doing it. He thinks that is the simplest solution. How to come up with something else to say Dixon did not do it? Come up with an explanation with fewer assumptions than the scenario I offered. Once you’re able to come up with that version of events, you’ve got your killer.


Chapter Eighteen

Contains the book title. Hill Rat broke the story on how Drysdale was killed. Trent will ask Kit for a date.


Chapter Twenty One

Kit is going on a date with Trent. She visits the shop where the gavels are made. She is the second person asking about gavels that day. The first was from the Sergeant at Arms office and not Garreth.


I blew out a long breath. Lying had never been my strong suit, but lately, the deceptions rolled off my tongue smooth as butter. I think this is true. The more you do something, the easier it becomes. Whether it is lying or sinning and building.


Chapter Twenty Two

Kit goes to Trent’s office. She sets up a fake call (Fake A Call). She uses a call, which turns out to be real to look in Gareth’s office. Everything seems OK.


Chapter Twenty Three

Kit thinks it is Gareth who killed Drysdale.


Chapter Twenty Four

The spare gavel is missing from the rostrum on the Speakers dias.


Chapter Twenty Five

Dan quit as chief of staff. Kit is on her way to her office to meet with O’Halloran. She gets accosted in a deserted hallway by the murderer and is abducted into a deserted cafeteria where she is bound and gagged.


Chapter Twenty Six

This part seems really lame. The murderer leaves her alone. She manages to free herself. Then chases after the murderer with the idea of drawing attention to him. Clarence stops the murderer.



Evaluation:

 Essentially if you read Shogan’s first mystery, Stabbing in the Senate, this is a repeat. It has a slightly different setting-the House of Representatives vs the Senate, and how the murder takes place. But the same main characters are part of the story.


I was interested in seeing if Shogan’s writing improved with practice or was her first book representative of her writing. She relies on much the same style and techniques-naming characters from the pantheon of recognized detectives. The relationships between characters seemed either forced or stilted.


For a quick summer read, this is an OK read. For something which will stimulate your gray cells, read some other mystery. (One redeeming part of the book is that she names several places to eat. If you are going to DC, this might be a decent guide to those kinds of establishments.)



 
Notes from my book group:

How do you want your life to change because you read this book?



Many of these questions are either from or adapted from LitLovers.

Why the title of Homicide in the House?

Does this story work as a mystery?

Did the ending seem fitting? Satisfying? Predictable?

Which character was the most convincing? Least?

Which character did you identify with?

Which one did you dislike?

Every story has a world view. Were you able to identify this story’s world view? What was it? How did it affect the story?

Why do you think the author wrote this book?

What would you ask the author if you had a chance?

What “takeaways” did you have from this book?

Describe the culture talked about in the book.

How is the culture described in this book different than where we live?

What economic or political situations are described?

Does the author examine economics and politics, family traditions, the arts, religious beliefs, language or food?

How did this book affect your view of the world?

Of how God is viewed?

What questions did you ask yourself after reading this book?

Talk about specific passages that struck you as significant—or interesting, profound, amusing, illuminating, disturbing, sad...?

What was memorable?

Reading Groups General Fiction Guide



Good Quotes:
  • First Line: The digital clock blinked an irritating red, glaring “11:59” in block numerals.
  • Last Line: Quite appropriately, the nighttime illumination of the Capitol caused my newly adorned ring finger to sparkle.
 
References:

Saturday, July 8, 2023

Stabbing in the Senate - Washington Whodunit #1

Book: Stabbing in the Senate - Washington Whodunit #1

Basic Information : Synopsis : Characters : Expectations : Thoughts : Evaluation : Good Quotes : References

Basic Information:

Author: Colleen J. Shogan

Edition: ePub on Libby from the Los Angeles Public Library

Publisher: Camel Press

ISBN: 9781603813310 (ISBN10: 1603813314)

Start Date: July 5, 2023

Read Date: July 8, 2023

236 pages

Genre:  Fiction, Mystery

Language Warning:  None

Rated Overall: 3  out of 5


Fiction-Tells a good story: 3 out of 5

Fiction-Character development: 3 out of 5



Synopsis:

Kit comes in a little early to deliver a paper to Senator Lansford. She finds him stabbed with a model helicopter. She is a suspect and works on clearing her name with an office mate, Meg.


Story goes through how they figure out the suspects and eliminate them. The story ends with Kit being attacked by the murderer in the subway running under the Capitol building and the murderer being arrested.



Cast of Characters:
  • Kit Marshall -Staffer of Senator Langsford’s office. Main person who solves the crime
  • Senator Lyndon Langsford-The murdered Senator
  • Vivian Langsford-The Senator’s wife who had the money in the family
  • Meg Peters-Office mate of Kit. Helps to solve the murder. Very attractive woman
  • Doug-Partner of Kit, Georgetown professor of history, author
  • Senator Regan-friend of Langsford but also on opposite sides of an important bill
  • Representative Jordan Jessup-conservative representative from the same state as Langsford. Will be appointed Senator after Langsford’s death.
  • Jeff Prentice-lobbyist for Carter Powell
  • Vivian Langsford-Senator Langsford’s wife, wealthy
  • Matt Rocker-policy person for the Senator’s office
  • Trevor-another office staffer who is a bit aloof, without social skills
  • Kara-scheduler for the Senator
  • Lucinda Porter-chief of staff
  • Mandy Lippman-Senator Langsford spokesperson
  • O'Halloran-Capitol Police detective in charge of the murder case
  • Kyle Tarnoff-Representative Jessops chief of staff
  • Henrik-Vivian Langsford’s trainer and lover
  • Carter Powell-Not a person, but a defense contractor who is up for a contract with the Federal government.


Expectations:
  • Recommendation: NPR
  • When: July 5, 2023
  • Date Became Aware of Book: July 5, 2023
  • Why do I want to read this book: We visited the National Archives this Spring. Recently the author was selected as the head of the National Archives. I am wondering how good of an author she is.
  • What do I think I will get out of it? A good summer read.

Thoughts:

As I said above, I was not looking for the great American murder mystery. Nor did I get it. This was an enjoyable read for me as I was struggling through another couple of books. I just wanted to have something to enjoy for a little while.


Some of my thoughts are that there were a lot of cliche moments here. Such as when Kit finds the recycle bin slightly askew. She finds a paper she had just put into the Senator’s desk when she discovered that the Senator had been murdered. (pulled the paper and was surprised to see my memo, the one I had carried into Langsford’s office earlier today) Or the mysterious voice on the phone. Or in the last part of the book, a fight. And then there is the protagonist to the story is able to solve the “who killed the Senator” in ways the professional police cannot.


And then there is the unbelievable. When Kit tells her accomplice that she knows who the murderer is. But the murderer is close enough to her that the murderer hears her. Or a chief of staff would be blabbing what her boss says is to be quiet about to everybody who she knows it seems like.


And then there is the naming of the mystery novel gods. From Agatha Christie to Dorothy Sayers-I will admit my heart skipped a beat when Lord Peter Whimsey (Follow up on some leads’? Do I need to remind you that you’re a Senate staffer, not Lord Peter) was named.


The author can be repetitive in the telling of her story and not in a subtle way. She has a tendency to tell rather than show at times.


And there are other references which either political junkies or local people would remember. Such as Gary Condit and Chandra Levy-they were local Central Valley people: Condit was accused of killing Levy, but it took several years to unravel that it was somebody else who did.


So much of the book is cheesy.


The author reviews motives: First, you have a power motive. Carter Power, to be exact. If Langsford backed the company, several people would stand to benefit, not just financially but by proving their influence and their ability to get things done. Second, there’s the political motive. Several people would move up in the world, one to the Senate. Third, you have a personal or financial motive, such as the insurance money



A couple interesting comments she makes:

  • It’s almost impossible for outsiders to understand the inner workings of a political circle. Isn’t that true of almost all specialty occupations? Or at least those within the occupations think so?
  • Living in the Washington, D.C., region has a lot of positives, yet amazing cuisine isn’t one of them. I am not a great connoisseur of high class food. We were just in DC this Spring. While we visited places to eat which were enjoyable, none really stood out as being exception or something we could only get in that region.
  • Freedom Trail in Boston. Since the Senator is from Boston, this stands to reason that he would bring friends to walk this trail in Boston. It would have been a bit startling to see that he took a friend along the Black Freedom Trail.
  • Several references which this Spring I became acquainted with on a visit to DC. Such as Union Station, the Metro and a few other places.


One thing Shogan says which is a bit of an eye opener is how staffers become lobbyists and lobbyists become staffers very quickly.



Evaluation:

I was looking for a quick, easy summer time read when I came across an article that the Nation Archivist was a mystery writer. So I checked out her first mystery book from the library. It did not disappoint in being a quick read. It fit what I wanted perfectly.


Having said that, just be aware, this is her first book and it shows the lack of experience in writing this type of a story. Many of the clue are given repeatedly and in obvious ways. The writing style, while not bad, does not rise to any of the really good writers.


Still it served what I wanted and I will probably read her second book just to see if she improves or not.



Good Quotes:

First Line: Ascending from the underground depths of the Metro, I confronted the alabaster dome in the distance.

Last Line: Me, too!



References:


Saturday, June 17, 2023

The Way Is Made By Walking

 Book: The Way Is Made By Walking

Basic Information : Synopsis : Expectations : Thoughts : Evaluation : Book Group : New Words : Book References : Good Quotes : Table of Contents : References

Basic Information:

Author: Arthur Paul Boers

Edition: epub on Libby from San Francisco Public Library

Publisher: IVP

ISBN: 9780830835072 (ISBN10: 0830835075)

Start Date: June 2, 2023

Read Date: June 17, 2023

219 pages

Genre:  Christianity, Camino

Language Warning:  None

Rated Overall: 4  out of 5


Religion: Christianity

Religious Quality: 3 out of 5

Christianity-Teaching Quality: 3 out of 5



Synopsis:

The author walked the Camino de Santigo in the mid-2000’s. This book is organized into chapters in line with his reflections or meditations rather than the chronology of the walk. He talks about why people walk the Camino, how it helped focus him on what is important in his life, virtues of simplicity, self-examination, community and solitude, life after pilgrimage and the place of walking in our modern life.



Expectations:
  • Recommendation: Mars Hill Audio
  • When: June 2, 2023
  • Date Became Aware of Book: Jan 9, 2019
  • Why do I want to read this book: Boers was interviewed during a Mars Hill Friday Feature. During the interview it was said that Boers had also walked the Camino. In the interview Boers talks about why people walked the Camino, ranging from a believer to non-believer, from those who are seekers to those who look at it as something to do.
  • What do I think I will get out of it? I am interested in walking the Camino one day. I would hold Boers gives some insight about why one should walk it.



Thoughts:

Note: I make several references to Camino-that is the Camino de Santigo. Also I use the initials JMT-the John Muir Trail,  which is a 211 miles trail through the Sierra Nevada mountains of California.


Foreword by Eugene Peterson

There is nothing more pedestrian (literally!) than walking on a way, a road, a path. Good one Peterson!


Pilgrimage is the ancient practice of walking, usually with others, to a holy site while paying prayerful attention to everything that takes place within and without, soul and body, all the ways that are inherent in the Way, along with the companions who are also on the Way. This is something to think about right from the get-go. I have wanted to walk the Camino. And yet, as I have read this book, the more I ask myself why? Not from walking. That seems interesting. But what is my motivation? Is it like walking the JMT? Another trail to mark off as saying I did it? Or do I want to walk it to explore my inner being? As a way to get close to God?




Acknowledgments

Walking the Camino de Santiago was the most intense experience of solitude in my life, but I did not do it alone. This is significant as I think of doing this walk as either alone or with a small group of people who are family. But Boers points out there is a whole wider range of people who assisted him in not only writing this book, but also in planning his trip. As a Christian, it is never just you and me God. Rather it is God, our fellowship, family, friends, and me who make anything in my life possible.

Copied from book



Map of Camino




Introduction

A good way to start the book: I once walked five hundred miles to attend church. It took him 31 days to walk the Camino. He goes through a brief background on the Camino. Also why he wanted to walk this path. Previously he had gone to European places of prayer to study them-he is a professor at a Mennonite college. There he discovered pilgrimages.


Why not just step out of the house and begin? Well, for one thing, not every walk is a pilgrimage. I think that is an important concept. Even walking the Camino may be just a form of exercise without a spiritual component. This may be the most important part of the book for me personally. Why do I want to walk the Camino? Would the El Camino Real be just as good as the Camino de Santigo?


How is it that people of our day, with the longest lifespans in history and a glut of “labor-saving” devices, find it astonishing to think of committing serious time to a spiritual endeavor?


He notes that many of his fellow travelers did not consider themselves Christian. That is not to demean those who walked it, but more to disperse the notion that it is by its nature a spiritual walk. To Boers, he walked it because he felt called to walk it by God.


Boers kept a journal-not from a walker’s perspective, but as a pilgrim. It gave him time to reflect on passages which seemed well known. Stefano: The Camino works in me…step by step. The Camino was a process for Boers. Change the accent and process is a verb with spiritual connotations. In religious ceremonies, celebrants and participants move in a common direction as part of their worship, mini pilgrimages.


all the way to heaven is heaven” attributed to Catherine of Siena. Boers, and others follow this up with because he [Jesus] said, I am the Way [Camino].


Antonio Machado: “ se hace camino al andar ” or “the way is made by walking.” These well-known words have taken on a life of their own,....



1. I want to Be in That Number: Drawn to Pilgrimage

After two weeks on the Camino, the author goes to emergency with infected blisters. He is verging on depression with what he is missing. Still no place where he would rather be. This all happens to many walkers on the Camino.


Boers uses the time walking as a time of prayer for others on the Camino as well as a time of meditation.


Talks about who James was.


Saints are to be signs of Jesus; they point us toward Christ. Not worshiping but for us to understand what it means to live like Jesus.


I like to think that walking makes any place holy. I do not think this is true as I do not think walking my neighborhood makes this place holy, except in the sense that all of God’s creation is holy, we just do not recognize it as such.


Boers points out that travel used to have the connotation of work. It was only 200 years ago when that word started to be used in the context of pleasure and rest. Scott Russell Sanders says we “stripped the holiness from travel with our commuting, our tourism, our idle shuttling about.” So the Camino is hard work, sometimes painful.


His outlook changed as people came around him. Still in pain, but able to have the comfort of others. And then eating together tends to mend us. This is why there was no place he would rather be.



2. Seeking God's Homeland: Christian Roots of Pilgrimage

He talks a lot about The Way and how this is Biblical.


His wife walked the first ten days-left due to work. I tried to rein in my feelings of loss. One of those things which I enjoy hiking by myself. But I feel the loss of companionship when Sherri is not there.


As I am reading this book, I am caught with the thought that it matters not how fast or long you walk, but it is the spirit you are walking it in. I wonder if it is a detriment to have a goal when you are walking a pilgrimage, but you make the journey the reason for the walk. My thoughts, not his. It might be his thoughts as well as I found this from the chapter-An irony—indeed a danger—of pilgrimage is that we try to settle in a final destination, considering only that particular place holy and forgetting the call to be faithfully on the move for God. Or later on he quotes Origen “Travelers on the road to God’s wisdom find that the further they go, the more the road opens out, until it stretches to infinity.”


Journeying, wandering, exile and pilgrimage themes are found throughout Scriptures. Several examples including Adam and Eve, David, Moses, Jacob, Abraham ,... Boers points out the various places in the New Testament about the way (odos) being used. In Acts Jesus' followers were first known as “the Way” even before being called “Christian”.


We sometimes forget the association between church and walking. He notes that we have lost the connection of walking and spirituality. Many people, probably most, when they go to church, they walk. Sometimes this is many hours to get there. At times, I think it is too much of a hassle to drive there.


Augustine famously prayed, “You made us for yourself and our hearts find no peace until they rest in you.”



3. Lord, Teach Us to Be Prayerful: Spirituality Lessons

How do you maintain practices while on your pilgrimage? You would think this would be simple. But at least when I hike, there is constant movement from the time you get up till the time you go to bed.


He asks Paul how he does it. He sings memorized Psalms, prays the Lord’s prayer, and observes quietness while walking. Yet questions remained. Would the demands of a pilgrimage affect what I could do? Would there be enough privacy and solitude in hostels for prayer in the early morning or late day? Would companions influence my practices? More importantly, would I be deepened in Christian life and faithfulness? Would I be taught by God along this way?


During times of quiet and solitude, he would pray, ponder Scripture and read from a volume of Teresa of Avila. His prayer was for friends and family. Church bells would remind him of why he was there. Regardless of the source, these peals were also a call and reminder to pray. Do they do that to me? Or do I just enjoy them?


He would converse with God. Each day, I examined a period in my life and talked it over with God. Sounds like good practice. He also used Anne Lamott’s two basic prayers, either “Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!” or “Help me! Help me! Help me!”.


Church Father Clement of Alexandria famously described prayer as “keeping company with God.”


He admired the trail left for pilgrims to follow-the yellow arrows and the scallop shells. I wonder what it would be like to have God’s will neatly laid out for discernment with vivid flechas. Why the constant work of prayer, journaling, Scripture reading, pondering, consulting with fellow believers? And then often we still are not sure that we have it right! You read in places where pilgrims will not find them or there are confusing signs. There I think you need to understand your destination and follow the map-both literally and spiritually. Boers would be on the look out for these blazes (flechas). He would get tense until he found one, wondering did he lose the way?


See God at work in all things. This included going to ER for his blisters.


Coincidences abound on the Camino. What did God want him to learn? What does God want me to learn as I walk through life?



4. Your Pack's Too Big: Simplify, Simplify, Simplify

While there is the temptation to make the pilgrimage only a spiritual journey, the Camino will remind you that there is a physical component to this journey as well. In this case, Boers is confronted by a French volunteer who lets him know his pack is too heavy. As he goes along, he does things like cut up books and discards what he has read-something which is against his grain. He comes in with a pack of 30 pounds-which to me is a good weekend pack with food and water.


He talks about how the early disciples and pilgrims took Jesus’ injunction seriously-take nothing on your journey.


He brings this to our daily lives. How much stuff do we need? What is extra baggage in life? So for months one of Mary’s spiritual disciplines was to give up and give away an item a day from her own household! [Her mother had died recently and she was needing to go through her stuff. This convinced her that she had too much stuff as well.]


He quotes Mark 10:23, but thinks in the light of the friendly French volunteer who wanted to make sure Boers finished the Camino rather than give up from the weight of his backpack. Was this what Jesus was doing with the rich young ruler?


He notes the temptation of picking up souvenirs. In tourism, consuming may replace actual experience.


Belongings, then, always weigh on me at some level, even when I do not carry them on my back.


The more stuff we own, the more effort and energy it takes to keep, maintain, insure and protect it.


When you walk on The Way, you will stick your foot in poop.


Aldo Leopold famously lamented, “One of the penalties of an ecological education is that one lives alone in a world of wounds.” Our culture tends to insulate us from the issues of our living. Every action we make, such as driving a car, is a theological decision and statement.


Being a pilgrim means changing one’s lifestyle.



5. The Road That Leads to Life: Challenges of Faithful Pilgrimage

Every day is still a struggle and each one requires a recommitment,” Paul told me-both on the Camino and in life. I was continually frustrated at my inability to live up to my own ideals. Why did the Christian journey have to be an ongoing battle, I wondered. Boers remembers that Jesus said to take up your cross DAILY. This would be an ongoing struggle. Or as Law noted, each morning is a resurrection.


There was a certain freedom in not knowing everything that was ahead.


Book title comes from a Spanish saying: “hace camino al andar” or “the way is made by walking”.


Walking and the wilderness may not be as comforting as it sounds. Jesus and later the desert fathers and mothers show that wilderness is not just a place of beauty and solace but also of testing and temptation.



6. The Journey Is Long: Camino Confessions

A pilgrimage gives a person a chance to review and evaluate themselves. while I never competed with others on the Camino, one person did pressure me unmercifully. This one I could not avoid and found hard to resist. I was my own greatest problem. Hard to escape yourself.


In Boers case, he seems to overdo things in his desire to achieve. There is a temptation to compare and want to be like someone else, or better.


Addictions counselors advise paying special attention to being HALT: hungry, angry, lonely or tired.


One of the pilgrims said that the Camino got harder as you went along. He insisted that it grew more psychologically difficult as a person neared his or her goal. With my JMT hike that was true. First week was getting the body into top shape. After that it was all psychological.


The lesson Boers learnt was to be prayerful. He learned to pay better attention to God—God’s company, God’s workings and God’s interventions.



7. Well That's the Camino: Hospitality and Solidarity

At the end of a long walk day, feeling exhausted, he went to a Bed and Breakfast. He was able to get refreshed with a fresh vegetarian dinner and clean surroundings. A good night's sleep.


He found that there was a wide range of establishments and hosts. While very busy with their official duties, they did respond to friendliness. He goes through a few of the more notable characteristics of some of the refugios.


Over and again, meals inspired and drew us together in surprising ways. Seems like a plain meal would rouse the pilgrims spirits and create community. Truly, we met God in each other and while sharing food. A friend told Boers once that If you can read the Gospels without getting hungry, you’re not paying attention. Another author, Christine Pohll says that: A shared meal is the activity most closely tied to the reality of God’s Kingdom.


Boers notes that many times there were people who did not share a common language. They conversed as much as they could. There was lots of smiling and laughter. That can be a good substitute when vocabulary is insufficient.


Talking helps people connect, knowing they are not alone in a struggle. One resolution Boers made was that as bad as he is with small talk, he resolved to do better and do it more often-just to establish that connection.


There is a sense among pilgrims that the Camino will provide. While not a deity, it does seem to have a blessing to it that God gives. Maybe it is by awaking hearts to sharing His goodness.



8. No "Ustedes" Por Favor: The Rules Are Different Here

Where are the boundaries on the Camino? That is what is discussed here. How open can you be? How much do you share? The rules seem to be different here where you would share deeply personal items with people whom you might never meet again. Sounds like another thing to get used to is that relationships will be transient.


He talks about the former use of you in different languages vs the more informal. English does not have that differentiation, but other languages do. On the Camino, everybody is equal, consequently, informal.


Being an ignorant traveler has its perks.


On the Camino it was important to move at one’s own pace. This is something he talks about earlier.


We all wanted and hoped for each person to succeed.


I once heard social philosopher Albert Borgmann remark that a way to recognize a particularly worthwhile moment is to be able to affirm: “There is no one I’d rather be with.” This is true. There are times where we have developed that special relationship or that special moment.

Why not encourage every believer we meet with a blessing? Is it so hard to find a simple phrase to inspire others on the path, in their following of Jesus the Way, the true Camino? What would be a good blessing? Have a good day is so trite.


Philo of Alexandria, an ancient Jewish philosopher, is reputed to have said, “Be compassionate, for everyone you meet is fighting a great battle.”



9. Secular Seekers: The Disconnect of Pilgrims and Church

Many of the walkers were not religious, at least at the start. They seemed to be wanting to do the Camino like people want to do the JMT. On the Camino, religious means Christian purposes of prayer or repentance, while spiritual indicates something more than secular goals but not necessarily Christian ones.) It is a mixed lot on who walks the Camino and why.


Many people did not engage. But Boers had many conversations about religious matters, particularly after people found out what he did for a living. As a professor—and formerly a preacher—I spend much time proclaiming the right way to think or theologize, but here I was called into a different, more attentive mode. People are complex. Boers not only walked a mile in their shoes, but 500 of them. So he gained a bit of understanding. Maybe that is what we need in our culture, a bit more walking together.


Many journelers. Seemed like most people wanted something more than what our culture was giving them. He found that the best way to talk about Christianity was to talk about following Jesus rather than church matters or theology or politics. Boers feels this is a missed opportunity by Christians-to minister to those on The Way.


Talks about spiritual not religious.


Seems strange that as church attendance is diminishing, the popularity of the Camino is increasing. Originally, most Christian pilgrimage sites and routes were popularly initiated. They were not begun by church leaders or hierarchies. A while later in the book Boers interviewed Ray Simpson, an Anglican priest, who sadly concluded that church “worship has generally lost its street credibility.


Taizé-Boers spent time here a couple of years before walking the Camino. He was influenced by what he experienced here. See the third Appendix.


In an era when North Americans work longer hours than four decades ago and perpetually complain of being busy, can we provide space for sabbath and rest, renewal and reorientation? Good question. Instead we raise the threshold against inquirers if we only permit or expect them to show up on Sunday mornings for formal services. Most of the time, church doors are locked, except at times when there are services.


The author notes that Augustine said that our hearts are restless. It is understandable that our feet are as well.



10. Focal Ways of Life: Putting Pilgrimage into Practice

In this chapter Boers talks about where our lives are focused. I think this comes from a philosopher named Albert Borgemann-I only really heard of him recently through Mars Hill Audio when they interviewed him. Boers also is a disciple of him as well.


Boers starts off with how mobile we are-we are always moving towards someplace. All movement is not pilgrimage as not all places are considered hallowed even if we honor those places or the people the places it honors. Boers confesses that at times when things get tough, he thinks about leaving. Henri Nouwen encouraged me to stay instead and, in his words, “go deeper.”


He talks about something Siguard Olsen said. Boers commentary is One place the church can engage the spiritual longing in our culture is to name the shallowness of how many of us live and to offer and model more grace-filled approaches. I wonder how Boers thinks this can be done? Focal living helps us identify and perceive Olson’s “something more,” a quality of life that we miss and long to find.


Boers defines Focal concerns are [as] objects, activities or practices with several qualities. Then he lists attributes of them:


First they have a “commanding presence.” They take energy or effort; they make demands on us. Some examples he gives are hiking and cooking.

Second, focal things and practices have deep and evident connections with the wider world, including people and our ecosystem. Example can be playing an instrument connected with a composer and the listener, while a counterexample is heating up food in a microwave is done with isolation or interaction with others.

Third, focal realities have “centering” or orienting power. They help us experience and be in touch with something “as greater than myself and of ultimate significance.” He gives an example that a cathedral or a wilderness has a tendency to grab you and keep your focus and make that a focal point of your attention..


One reason the Camino is so attractive is that it points to different ways and possibilities for living.



Borgmans has for focal affirmations.

 “When were you last able to affirm them?”

There is no place I would rather be.

There is nothing I would rather do.

There is no one I would rather be with.

This I will remember well



That should be at the forefront of my thought. Not what I am going to do next.


There is a sense of comradery, even if a person is hiking alone. There is a shared sense of doing something unusual together. Boers experienced only minor aggravations from fellow walkers, not any large scale disagreements. That may be due to the nature of this walk. If there is someone disagreeable to you, you can discreetly drift away-walk at a different pace.


But he points out that there is a shared goal without competition.

What you did in real life is a common starting question. Careers can be places where we feel conflicted and torn. … We engaged questions about how we choose to live, where we expend time and energy, and how we employ gifts. Not only was there talking about occupations, but how they felt about their occupation. Some decided after the Camino to change occupations. To Boers, the Camino is a reminder that an occupation is a means to an end-to live and provide. Not the end of a matter.



11. Walking in Faith: Walking as Spiritual Practice

Like hikers on the JMT, Camino walkers discuss body issues which would almost never ever be discussed with strangers. I’ve said, rules were different on the Camino. He notes that the average American only walks a few hundred yards a day. I do not think he is right. A doctor at the Mayo Clinic puts it at 1.5 to 2 miles a day. Nhat Hanh often observes: not only walking on water is a marvel, even walking on the earth is a miracle.


Look up feet/foot in Scripture. Boers notes that it is mentioned a lot more often than we recognize.


Even before the Camino, Boers noted that extended times of walking helped to reset him. His method includes:

  • Relax, take deep breaths and release tensions
  • Evaluate what is causing the tension
  • Gain perspective
  • How did life get out of balance
  • Clarity on situations

St. Marcellus


Advocates renewed emphasis on spiritual disciplines.

Prayer Walking.


I had fretted over my feet, and here they were—after a close call—working well. It was all gift and grace



12. Here I Walk, I Can Do No Other: Keeping Faith With Our Feet

The age old question for backpackers-what is essential and what is a nicety? No clear cut answers in either the book nor in real life. His immediate question concerns a small map he was given of the entire Camino. For hikers the overall picture is far less important than the immediate, which way do I turn?


Walkers need different kinds of maps than drivers or riders. The world looks and feels different on foot than in a vehicle. Cars flatten experience of the earth: while you can’t help noticing serious hills, many slopes are not perceived. I do not think Boers went far enough. When you automate something, you no longer have to pay attention to the particulars. You are more interested in how it is functioning, rather than why am I doing something. Your experiences are different as well.


If saunter really does stem from Saint Terre, then by using my own two feet I am learning to honor and cherish the holiness of place. This is a popular walking/hiking word. John Muir picked it up from Thoreau. It has an aire of aimlessness.


Walking affects not just space and distance but also time itself. In our high-speed way of living—which we intriguingly call “driven”—we miss many things. Christian faith calls us to a different pace of life, and walking is a vital way to achieve that. I wish that Boers would have expanded on this-both from why does he think we are called to this and in what form it would take. On the first, by not being driven, we have time to listen. Listen particularly to God and then listen and experience that which is around me.


Driving is an activity that is almost always merely a means to an end. Live time, however, is worthwhile in itself; it is enjoyable with its own internal, intrinsic goods. Interesting. Even in retirement, do I experience “Live Time”?


They [the Hebrews under Moses walking across the desert] learned “the word of God in the wilderness as they walked three miles an hour” with “the three mile an hour God.” That is a really interesting expression. This came from Kosuke Koyama.


Walking is an act of dissent; it is countercultural. Is a 30 minute wasted time?



Conclusion

Talks about his arrival to Santiago. There was the bittersweet of meeting people whom he had walked with so far and yet would never see again in this life. I imagine the afterlife to be an opportunity to catch up with those I’ve lost touch with along the way: friends and family, brothers and sisters in the faith, casual acquaintances, and even historical saints who inspired me from afar.


And then there is the sadness of accomplishing a goal and wondering, is that all? Meister Eckhart that I heard at a low point years ago: “Whatever happens to you is the best possible thing for your salvation.”


Taizé verse:

Bless the Lord, my soul

And bless God’s holy name

Bless the Lord, my soul,

who leads me into life.


And then there is a fitting quote from Abbess Samanthnn to end the main part of the book: Since God is near to all who call upon him, we are under no obligation to cross the sea. The kingdom of heaven can be reached from every land



Appendix 1. Recovering and Reclaiming Christian Pilgrimage

A pilgrimage is a journey undertaken in the light of a story. A great event has happened; the pilgrim hears the reports and goes in search of evidence, aspiring to be an eyewitness. The pilgrim seeks not only to confirm the experience of others firsthand but to be changed by the experience.


Talks about a Celtic tradition where they believe there are “thin places” where God seems more accessible to humans. Not sure that is true, but I suspect there are places where we are more accessible to God-not that God cannot reach us anyplace, rather we let our defenses down and it is a place where we are more receptive to listen to God speaking to us.


Does a brief history of Christian pilgrimage and resistance to it. An unknown Irish leader warned about the fruitlessness of pilgrimage unless you already had your house in order. “To go to Rome means great toil and little profit. The [heavenly] king whom you seek can only be found there if you bring him within yourself.”


This is the question I have: Tourist or Pilgrim? Boers is not opposed to being a tourist, just do not wrap yourself in the cloak of a pilgrim if you do. Boers sees this as a continuum rather than an either/or. He suggests five tests to help determine what you are doing. One of them struck me particularly: Pilgrimage has a purpose, goal and destination of meeting and encountering God and God’s truths.


We should first visualize our daily walk in this life as a pilgrimage. Even going to church should be done in that spirit.


He concludes this with several elements of pilgrimage, including this one: The pilgrim goes with a spirit of openness, hoping to encounter God and anticipating the growth that this encounter invites. Pilgrimages are not done casually but require time to prepare and ready oneself.



Appendix 2. Planning a Christian Pilgrimage

Pilgrimage can grow from all kinds of motives: need for rest, realization that something about your faith has grown dull or stale, facing a transition, trying to process a major crisis, longing for healing or resolution, inexplicable attraction to a particular sojourn, desire for more intense prayer, yearning to explore and better understand your beliefs, wanting to review your life or set a new course.


What would be my motivation for doing something like the Camino? Pray, talk through it with your small group and family. Keep a journal of thoughts about it. Read.


Once you have gone, ponder what you have learned and felt.


He notes that it is hard to have other people interested in his experiences. I found this with the JMT. They only wanted a couple sentences to summarize 24 days, 221 miles. I wanted at least a page to share, if not a chapter.


Don’t underestimate the power of corporate support for pilgrimage.



Appendix 3. Pilgrimage Destinations

Boers lists other sites which might work as pilgrimage sites. He says this is not an exhaustive list. With each of the places listed below, he gives a description based upon an author and then some reference books.


Appendix 4. Camino Pilgrimage Resources

He provides a list of books about the Camino. Some are guidebooks, some are more biographical and some are spiritual.



Notes

The Bible is an outdoor book: Wendell Berry, “Christianity and the Survival of Creation,” in Sex, Economy, Freedom & Community (New York: Pantheon, 1992), p. 103.




Evaluation:

 Arthur Boers walked the Camino de Santigo in the mid-2000’s. This book is a series of reflections on his adventure. It is not a travel guide nor a series of meditations, but how the Camino affected him, particularly places which he has felt too comfortable in our world.


Boers has been a Mennonite pastor and is currently a professor at the Mennonite Seminary in Elkhart. He approached the Camino as a Christian who is Dutch from an Anabapist tradition. As such, some of the Catholicism of the Camino was a bit foreign to him, along with the language-he was sufficiently conversational in Dutch, French and Spanish to make himself understood. But during the Catholic services there was a lot which over his head.


This was a good book for me to read as I have a desire to walk the Camino myself. But there are question he asks: are you looking for this to be walked as I would hike in the Sierra or a pilgrimage. This book is helping to clarify my thoughts on it.



 
Notes from my book group:

Why did you read this book?


Were you more or less interested in walking the Camino de Santiago after reading this book?


How do you want your life to change because you read this book?


What makes a long walk a pilgrimage? How are the two different?


Boers asks the question: How is it that people of our day, with the longest lifespans in history and a glut of “labor-saving” devices, find it astonishing to think of committing serious time to a spiritual endeavor? What is your answer?


Along the Camino are markings, Flechas, which show the pilgrim where to go. Was there a time when Boers lost these markings? What was his reaction? How does Boers show this is how God also gives us directions?


As Boers starts his Camino walk, a volunteer encourages him to lighten his load. How does Boers use this experience in chapter 4? In what ways do you carry too much stuff?


If you have done a long walk, did you find yourself being more prayerful or touching things more spiritually? If you have not, what do you think it would be like?


Boers talks about how the simplicity of a meal seemed to have the pilgrims bound closer together. Why do you think that is? Has this been your experience when you have eaten with other people where you are having a shared experience?


Boers said he did not do small talk well, but he resolved to do it better and more often. Why? What benefit did he find in small talk? Do you agree?


When someone has had a great adventure such as a pilgrimage or a long walk, how do you listen to the person?


He felt that he was called by God to walk the Camino. How does he describe this calling?


Many of these questions are either from or adapted from LitLovers.

Why the title of The Way Was Made By Walking?

Does this story work as a spiritual reflection?

Every story has a world view. Were you able to identify this story’s world view? What was it? How did it affect the story?

In what context was religion talked about in this book?

Was there anybody you would consider religious?

How did they show it?

Was the book overtly religious?

How did it affect the book's story?

Why do you think the author wrote this book?

What would you ask the author if you had a chance?

What “takeaways” did you have from this book?

What central ideas does the author present?

Are they personal, sociological, global, economic, spiritual?

What evidence does the author use to support the book's ideas?

Is the evidence convincing...definitive or...speculative?

Does the author depend on personal opinion, observation, and assessment? Or is the evidence factual—based on science, statistics, historical documents, or quotations from (credible) experts?

What implications for you, our nation or the world do these ideas have?

Are these idea’s controversial?

To whom and why?

Describe the culture talked about in the book.

How is the culture described in this book different than where we live?

What economic or political situations are described?

Does the author examine economics and politics, family traditions, the arts, religious beliefs, language or food?

How did this book affect your view of the world?

Of how God is viewed?

What questions did you ask yourself after reading this book?

Talk about specific passages that struck you as significant—or interesting, profound, amusing, illuminating, disturbing, sad...?

What was memorable?


New Words:
  • meseta-plateau
  • liminality-a term used to describe the psychological process of transitioning across boundaries and borders.
Book References:
  • Pilgrim’s Progress by John Bunyan
  • Pilgrim’s Regress by C. S. Lewis
  • The Cloister Walk by Kathleen Norris.
  • ??? volume by Teresa of Ávila
  • Little Gidding by T. S. Eliot
  • Canterbury Tales by Chaucer
  • The DaVinci Code by Dan Brown
  • Time by Design by Linda Breen Pierce
  • Later Rule by Francis of Assisi
  • The Way of the Lord: Christian Pilgrimage by Tom Wright
  • Martyrs Mirror by Thieleman J. van Braght


Good Quotes:
  • First Line: Walking the Camino de Santiago was the most intense experience of solitude in my life, but I did not do it alone.
  • Last Line: I pray the Camino bears fruit so that indeed “I will walk in the presence of the Lord.” (Psalm 116:8)
  • How is it that people of our day, with the longest lifespans in history and a glut of “labor-saving” devices, find it astonishing to think of committing serious time to a spiritual endeavor? Chp 1. I want to Be in That Number: Drawn to Pilgrimage
  • The path to heaven lies through heaven, and all the way to heaven is heaven. Catherine of Siena Attributed by Dorothy Day in On Pilgrimage
  • You made us for yourself and our hearts find no peace until they rest in you. Augustine, Confessions.
  • In tourism, consuming may replace actual experience. Chp 4. Your Pack's Too Big: Simplify, Simplify, Simplify
  • The more stuff we own, the more effort and energy it takes to keep, maintain, insure and protect it. Chp 4. Your Pack's Too Big: Simplify, Simplify, Simplify
  • One of the penalties of an ecological education is that one lives alone in a world of wounds. Aldo Leopold, Round River, pg 165
  • Jesus and later the desert fathers and mothers show that wilderness is not just a place of beauty and solace but also of testing and temptation. Chp 5. The Road That Leads to Life: Challenges of Faithful Pilgrimage
  • Truly, we met God in each other and while sharing food. Chp 6. The Journey Is Long: Camino Confessions
  • A shared meal is the activity most closely tied to the reality of God’s Kingdom. Christine Pohll, Making Room: Recovering Hospitality as a Christian Tradition
  • Being an ignorant traveler has its perks. Chp 8. No "Ustedes" Por Favor: The Rules Are Different Here
  • Why not encourage every believer we meet with a blessing? Is it so hard to find a simple phrase to inspire others on the path, in their following of Jesus the Way, the true Camino? Chp 8. No "Ustedes" Por Favor: The Rules Are Different Here
  • Be compassionate, for everyone you meet is fighting a great battle. Attributed to Philo of Alexandria
  • One place the church can engage the spiritual longing in our culture is to name the shallowness of how many of us live and to offer and model more grace-filled approaches. Chp 10. Focal Ways of Life: Putting Pilgrimage into Practice
  • When were you last able to affirm them?”
    • There is no place I would rather be.
    • There is nothing I would rather do.
    • There is no one I would rather be with.
    • This I will remember well. Albert Borgman, The Moral Complexion of Consumption
  • Walking affects not just space and distance but also time itself. In our high-speed way of living—which we intriguingly call “driven”—we miss many things. Christian faith calls us to a different pace of life, and walking is a vital way to achieve that. Chp 12. Here I Walk, I Can Do No Other: Keeping Faith With Our Feet
  • Whatever happens to you is the best possible thing for your salvation. Meister Eckhart, posted on wall in St Georgy’s Abbey, Three Rivers, Michigan
  • Since God is near to all who call upon him, we are under no obligation to cross the sea. The kingdom of heaven can be reached from every land. Abbess Samanthann- I could not find a direct reference, but a couple of people quote her. Boers quotes it from a book by Edward C Sellner.
 
Table of Contents:
  • Foreword by Eugene Peterson
  • Acknowledgments
  • Map of Camino
  • Introduction
  • 1. I want to Be in That Number: Drawn to Pilgrimage
  • 2. Seeking God's Homeland: Christian Roots of Pilgrimage
  • 3. Lord, Teach Us to Be Prayerful: Spirituality Lessons
  • 4. Your Pack's Too Big: Simplify, Simplify, Simplify
  • 5. The Road That Leads to Life: Challenges of Faithful Pilgrimage
  • 6. The Journey Is Long: Camino Confessions
  • Photograph Section
  • 7. Well That's the Camino: Hospitality and Solidarity
  • 8. No "Ustedes" Por Favor: The Rules Are Different Here
  • 9. Secular Seekers: The Disconnect of Pilgrims and Church
  • 10. Focal Ways of Life: Putting Pilgrimage into Practice
  • 11. Walking in Faith: Walking as Spiritual Practice
  • 12. Here I Walk, I Can Do No Other: Keeping Faith With Our Feet
  • Conclusion
  • Appendix 1. Recovering and Reclaiming Christian Pilgrimage
  • Appendix 2. Planning a Christian Pilgrimage
  • Appendix 3. Pilgrimage Destinations
  • Appendix 4. Camino Pilgrimage Resources
  • Notes


References: